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Gregorian was marching along a corridor. Its walls were made of rough stone and there were no doors, pictures or any decorations. There was not a breath of air and everything around him looked torpid.
His steps were loudly echoing around him. In fact, if he stopped he could hear the beating of his heart. He did not understand why he was walking, but he knew he had to hurry.
Then, he heard a sound which was coming somehow from the stone of the walls and from the air around him It was an unlike any human speech or mind. It was the most adorable and celestial music he had ever heard. He was entranced. It sounded like a call in an unknown, but gentle and enjoyable language. Nevertheless its magnificence it was unattainable for people.
Gregorian suddenly realized he had stopped. He rushed forward along the corridor until he reached a wall. What could he do now? He could not reach the place the sound came from! He turned around and saw a wall behind himself. It was getting closer! He was trapped. He could feel himself stifling because of shock.
Then, he could not believe his luck. A small cold hand held him and pulled him up. He was standing in an oval chamber of white marble. Then it changed in front of him. The marble cracked and it became dark.
Unexpectedly, a monster walked out and opened its horrible mouth…
Suddenly, he woke up and realized it had been a nightmare.


Ïóáëèêóâàíî îò BlackCat íà 20.05.2007 @ 16:39:18 



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Êîìåíòàðèòå ñà íà ïóáëèêóâàùèÿ ãè. Íèå íå ñìå îòãîâîðíè çà òÿõíîòî ñúäúðæàíèå.

Íå ñà ïîçâîëåíè êîìåíòàðè íà Àíîíèìíè, ìîëÿ ðåãèñòðèðàé ñå.

Re: Nightmare
îò oziris (rrrrrrr@abv.bg) íà 05.08.2007 @ 13:49:36
(Ïðîôèë | Èçïðàòè áåëåæêà) http://kirilvlahov.blogspot.com/
`the beating of his heart` - ìèñëÿ, ÷å å the beat ñàìî èëè ïî-äîáðå èçïîëçâàé he could hear his heart beating, àêî íå ñè ñèãóðíà.

`It was an unlike any human speech or mind` - ïðåäïîëàãàì, ÷å it òóê îçíà÷àâà çâóêà. Òîãàâà êàê ìîæå åäèí çâóê äà ïðèëè÷à íà ÷îâåøêè óì? Âåðîÿòíî ñè èìàëà ïðåäâèä ÷îâåøêà ìèñúë, òîãàâà any human speech or thought. È ïðåä unlike íÿìà an, çàùî òè å íåîïðåäåëèòåëåí ÷ëåí êàòî íÿìàø ñúùåñòâèòåëíî?

`a wall behind himself` - ñàìî him å òóê

`stifling because of shock.` - èçîáùî íå ìîæåø äà êàæåø òàêà íà àíãëèéñêè. Õì, äà ðå÷åì he was horrified, èëè ïðîñòî shocked, äà ðå÷åì. Íå ñå îïèòâàé äà ïðåâåæäàø áúëãàðñêèòå èçðå÷åíèÿ, êîèòî òè èäâàò íà óìà. Àêî íå ìèñëèø íà àíãëèéñêè, òåêñòúò òè íèêîãà íÿìà äà çâó÷è äîáðå.

Êàòî öÿëî å ìíîãî òðîìàâî è èçìú÷åíî. Îïèòàé äà ïðåìàõíåø íåíóæíèòå ôðàçè è äóìè, êîèòî íàòîâàðâàò èçêàçà, íàïðèìåð:
`Then, he heard a sound which was coming somehow from the stone of the walls and from the air around him`

ìîæå äà ñòàíå

`He then heard a sound, coming somehow from the inside of the walls/from the very walls` Íå îáÿñíÿâàé èçëèøíî, ÷èòàòåëÿò ìîæå äà ñè ãî ïðåäñòàâè è òàêà. Îñâåí òîâà èçáÿãâàé ñëîæíèòå âðåìåíà. Äîðè è äà ñà ïðàâèëíè ;) Êîãàòî ìîæåø, ïðèäúðæàé ñå êúì past simple, òàêà ÷èòàòåëÿò íå ñå íàòîâàðâà.

Äðóãîòî êîåòî å, âèäúò íà òîâà ïðîèçâåäåíèå ìè ñå ãóáè. Ïðèåìàì, ÷å ïðîñòî ñè èñêàëà äà ñè óïðàæíÿâàø àíãëèéñêèÿ, â êîåòî íÿìà íèùî ëîøî è äîðè ìèñëÿ, ÷å òóê å ìÿñòî òî÷íî çà òîâà :)
Àêî ëè íå - òîâà îïðåäåëåíî íå å ðàçêàç, íå ñå çàáëóæäàâàé. Òî íå êàçâà íèùî, íÿìà ïîñëàíèå, ïî÷òè íèêàêâî ðàçâèòèå. Ñúáèòèÿòà íå ñëåäâàò íÿêàêâà ëîãè÷åñêà ïîñëåäîâàòåëíîñò, êîÿòî äà âîäè êúì èäåÿòà. Ìîæå äà áúäå ñàìî ÷àñò îò ðàçêàç, äà ðå÷åì.